Talk:Jane Roberts/Archive 1
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Archival note: Frequent top-posting on Talk:Jane Roberts left the order of threads in a mess. Lacking the patience to refactor 164kb, I just picked a point in the middle and archived everything above it. The result is that this Archive 1 contains threads begun from 2003 through, July 2006, with some exceptions. If someone wants to undo my work and refactor the whole thing properly, feel free. JamesMLane t c 08:41, 23 December 2006 (UTC)
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It isn't necessary to cast doubt on everything that Jane Roberts said; thus it isn't necessary to say that Jane Roberts "claimed" to be skeptical of Seth's origins. The qualifying comment at the top of the article is enough to qualify the entire article without peppering the text with qualifying words such as "claimed". Furthermore, the "claimed" text that Max Mangel keeps inserting is awkward.
I question whether the Criticism section is appropriate for this article at all, since the entire article is preceded by the qualifying comment in brackets; but if it is going to stay, the wording has to be impartial and free of emotional overtones, such as derision.
Furthermore, there is no reason why there can't be an answer to criticism in the Criticism section.
I have added comments at the bottom of this page.--Caleb Murdock 05:05, 16 June 2006 (UTC)