User:Mitsuo500/Commodification
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12/19 removed holidays sections flagged for plagiarism.. sent Ian a question;Hello, I'm new to editing Wikipedia, and went through WikiEdu training this semester and editing the Commodification article was a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 21 August 2023 and 15 December 2023.
The question is, does moving sections within the article, Alphabetizing the Examples section, cause the Wikipedia bots to flag sections as plagiarism? No changes, but reorganizing the structure for clarity. If this is the case, please undo any removals.
12/18/23 sections strikethrough removed from live article flagged for possible plagiarism
12/17 Removed three section from live article flagged for plagiarism.. not by me.
12/16 7:30a moved all edits to live. Waiting to see if any Undo's happen. Will comment on Commodification Talk page that edits have been completed.
12/16 moving edits to live, complicated to integrate my changes into the live article, focusing on not deleting relevant section that are currently live while cutting and pasting section from this sandbox.
12/13 will submit assignment as complete.
12/12 Final checks to article draft and will add Reflective essay notes here to explain additions, changes, citations and what I have learned by becoming an editor of Wikipedia articles. This skill has opened my eyes to the type of information that is provided by wikipedia, and I can not evaluate wikipedia articles critically before using information provided there. Throughout the assignment I have posted a blog here on actions and discoveries completed to improve the Commodification article.
12/11 Last class meeting, submission of article due this week. Finishing up Communications study section, Last edits complete.. next read-through will be the final draft
12/10 added hyperlinks.
12/9 Self-Commodification section complete
12/9/23 correct citation: Rosenberry, Jack; Vicker, Lauren A. (25 August 2021). Applied Mass Communication Theory: A Guide for Media Practitioners (3 ed.). New York: Routledge. doi:10.4324/9781003121695. ISBN 978-1-003-12169-5. S2CID 241008444.
12/7/23 Continuing to polish work... start working on reflective essay, making sure main editing points are covered in finishing Commodification article.
12/6/23 Planning to add a paragraph: Section on Commodification of Culture as a theory, under the History section.. more of a distinction of Commodification of Culture as the process of making goods and services into something for profit, versus Commodification of Culture as a theory.
12/4/23 Add to bibliography: Bakker, K. (2005). Neoliberalizing Nature? Market Environmentalism in Water Supply in England and Wales. Annals of the Association of American Geographers, 95(3), 542–565. https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1467-8306.2005.00474.x
12/2/23 Working on peer review suggestions.. added NYE and Easter images for Holiday Commodification. Updated caption for bell hooks, per peer review. A few more review suggestions to be completed. Article feels in good shape...
11/29 Peer review notes to work on : Clarify Commodification of Culture sentence, add Scholars (Dr.King note), Combine Media and Advertising commodification. Opportunities and Criticism of Commodification - (possibly a distinction or clarification in Commodification of Culture section) (Possibly a section under History of Wins/Opportunities pros/cons of Commodification). Change lead/concepts to coincide with examples in article (add love, patriotism subsection, remove sport, language).
11/27 Bolding sections worked on for Peer Review.
11/21 Lead and History section moved from this sandbox to live article.. See Also links moved from sandbox to live article. Added See Also: Commodification of nature, Commodification of water to History section
11/20 starting to move sections from here to the live article.. the cut and pasted section did not keep the font size from here to the live article.. I had to re-edit the section I moved to correct font size to "Paragraph" instead of Heading size.
11/20 removed Aspects section.. removed toponymic section. added Media and Self-commodification examples.
11/20 removed an un-cited section from public goods to the Commodification article. paragraph of bottled water seemed biased and without reference. Added St. Patricks day picture to holidays section.
11/13 adding code for aligning pictures in a row
11/11 clean up and added notes for future work in Commodification of Culture section.
11/9 After meeting with Dr. King.. will reorganize structure to have Commodification of Culture section, with Baron & Davis reference and Robert Shepard article references.
11/7/23 Minor Edits to Internet, Tourism, Holidays for clarity
11/7/23 Organization fixes, added section, moved Marx paragraph under history, added Marx images.
11/6/23 Class discussion or Wikipedia assignment. Examples from Dr.King: Models of Communication, Social Identity Theory, Cognitive Dissonance, Maslow's hierarchy of needs. Tips for completing assignment: Search Library articles for Meta-analysis of topic, for organization: find book chapter and use organization as a guide. Common section for organization: Lead, History, Components (Aspects), Examples, Applications. To do: create a second sandbox with original Commodification wiki article with no changes from 10/30/23.. then peer reviewers can see changes I've made on Commodification sandbox.
10/23 Understanding drafting changes in the sandbox.
10/21/23 Starting to edit Commodification. I will look up some references this week.
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