User:Gabrielramon43/sandbox
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Article: Bad Bunny[1]
Evaluating Content:
- Not everything provided in the article is actually relevant to the main article topic. Two main things that stood out were not necessary to included and did not contribute to the overall topic. The first thing is that in the very fist lines of the article, it explains who Bad Bunny is, his music, where he is from, and the fact that he was a grocery bagger while his music career was beginning. In my opinion, saying that he was a grocery bagger was very off topic. The second piece of writing that wasn't relevant was in the Career section, it stated how the lyrics to one of his songs is sexually stimulating. Though some of his music can be controversial, I thought that it was unnecessary to add that piece to it.
- From what I read of the article, most of the information is up to date and accurately with the timeline of his music career. The one thing I did feel as though was missing is the release of his very first album, titled X 100PRE, in late 2018.
- As far as improvements, I believe that the one thing that could be improved is expanding on his time at the University of Puerto Rico at Arecibo. It would have been interesting to know whether or not he graduated and what his area of study was.
Evaluating tone:
- For the most part I would say that this article does at good job at remaining neutral, except for the one about Bad Bunny's music being sexual. The wording itself does not seem negative yet, the tone of the article makes it sound a little negative.
- I do not believe that any viewpoints are that overrepresented. The only information that I believe is underrepresented in his educational career and his latest album.
Evaluating Sources:
- Most of the links to the citations do seem to work and take you directly to source information. The sources also do support the claims of the article.
- Each fact in the article is supported by either one or more appropriate reference. However, most of the sources are from independent websites. They are also a bug combination of English and Spanish sources. Most of the article's sources are not neutral, most are showing him in a positive light and highlight his accomplishment with awards and collaborations with various other artists
Checking the talk page:
- There are not any conversations on the talk of the article. The only things located in the talk page are a request for the article is tefl to be edited and a section describing that the article information has been nominated for deletion. In the section about deletion it does mention how bad Bunny got his name which isn't in the the original article.
- The article does not seem to be rated just yet nor is it a part of any wikiprojects.
- The way wikipedia discusses this topic does not relate at all to class discussions because this is a topic that we do not discuss in class.
Article Selection for Wiki Project:
Ideas Topic Ideas:
- access to clean/water resource and conservation in Mexico (this is most likely the topic I will chose)
- access to clean water/water resource and conservation in California.
- the effects of waste/plastic/oil spill in the pacific ocean
- effects of droughts in California
COMMENT: I think we decided that you're contribution would best fit as a section of the existing page Water supply and sanitation in Mexico , is that correct? If so go ahead and assign yourself that page. Julianfulton (talk) 03:54, 23 February 2019 (UTC)
Possible Sources for Wiki Project:
- http://documents.worldbank.org/curated/en/805901468281748091/pdf/411690MX0Lerma1ase1study1501PUBLIC1.pdf
- http://documents.worldbank.org/curated/en/358891468050661935/pdf/382050ENGLISH01ve0950Water01PUBLIC1.pdf
- http://www.worldbank.org/en/results/2017/10/30/delivering-better-water-services-to-mexicans
- https://blogs.worldbank.org/water/category/countries/mexico
- http://www.doingbusiness.org/en/reports/case-studies/subnational/connecting-to-water-and-sewerage-in-mexico
- the class text book, Environment: Science, Issues, Solutions
- http://www.worldbank.org/en/results/2017/10/30/delivering-better-water-services-to-mexicans
Bibliography/Notes
- This source, titled Clean Energy and Water: assessment of Mexico for improved water services and renewable energy, taken from the text of Environment, Development and Sustainability.The text is authored by Kelly T. Sanders, Carey W. King, Ashlynn S. Stillwell, and Micheal E. Webber. This article discusses that though Mexico has been know mainly for its oil production, it has also been known for its scare water resources. The main issue in solving this epidemic is the lack of energy resources in many areas of Mexico. The authors propose different ideas for renewable energy sources in order to provide access to clean water in many parts of the country.[2]
- The article, titled Mexico Infrastructure Public Expenditure Review, published on October 24, 2005, overall discusses the different types of finical tasks, aid, reform, issues, and services that banks have been linked with across various sections and departs in Mexico. The main argument discussed is the need for finical sustainability in order to keep public resources and infrastructure stable. One of the sections that this article analyses are water supply and sanitation in Mexico and the costs affected and/or related with it. [3]
- This particular source titled, Delivering Better Water Services to Mexicans, comes from The World Bank website, www.worldbank.org. The article itself describes what the program PROME is and how it used to provide cleaner water to communities in Mexico. PROME stands for Programa de Mejoramiento de Eficiencia de Organismos Operadores, was established by the Mexican government and was given various loans to use to prompter themselves and to purchase utilities for their own projects.[4]
Article Outline
- Historical Content
- there already is a section that included the history of water supply and sanitation is the original article, however the timeline stops at 2000. I can possibly ad more to it for the past 20 years I regards not only to supply and sanitation but access to clean water. Also, since the historical timeline for this article is about supply and sanitation, I can also add to the other time periods in regards to access and give them more depth.
- Water Technology
- For this section, I would like to go in depth about recent technological developments that aid Mexico in getting access to clean water. I would also like to explain technology they have developed that is used to purify other types of water into clean usable water.
- Climate
- For this particular section I would primarily discuss how Mexico is typically a dry place and doesn't receive mush rain water to being with. This could be a topic that I could use to explain why Mexico does not have the most amount of available water to use in general due to its dry climate. I could also explain how climate change has affected Mexico's climate in past couple years and how it has affected the amount of water they receive. This section could also be used as a background section that sets the tone for the rest of the Wiki article.
- I could also include the climate of specific areas/cities in Mexico and the amount of clean
- Lack of Water Resources
- This particular section might be a bit similar to the water technology and/or climate but I would still like to include it and try make it about other resources about water access that do not fall under those two categories. This section could maybe be dedicated to natural resources such as wells, rivers, etc.
- Water Laws and Regulations
- In the original article I am using there is section that is well developed regarding this topic. However, it mainly analyzes one singular regulation regarding supply and sanitation. I would want to included multiple regulations that deal with water access and even possibly include foreign policies and agreements dealing with Mexico's water access. Considering the original article does have something similar to this, this section is still up in the air and might not be included in the final edit.
- Organization/Programs
- In this section of the Wiki Article I would like to mention different organization and programs that are aimed at helping different communities in Mexico with access to fresh water. This would not be such an in depth section since it would difficult to find scholarly sources on the different organizations and programs that do this. This is also a section that is up in the air and could possibly
This is my working draft for the wikipedia project. I still have to working on half of the article section, edit, and add in my source citations.
Article Draft