Draft:Marwar - Mewar War
War between Rathores and Sisodias Rajputs / From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Marwar - Mewar War refers to the conflict between the Rathore and Sisodia Rajputs.[1][2][3]
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Submission declined on 15 April 2023 by InterstellarGamer12321 (talk). This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner. Declined by InterstellarGamer12321 13 months ago. |
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- Comment: Submission still reads like WP:ESSAY. MAINEiac4434 (talk) 17:34, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: The submission currently reads like a WP:ESSAY rather than an encyclopaedic article, and a lot of copyediting/rewriting is needed. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 09:52, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: Several paragraphs entirely unreferenced, and long paragraphs with just one citation at the end — where is all this information coming from?Also, while offline sources are acceptable, they must be cited in a way that provides full details of the publication, so that it can be located and the citation verified, if required. None of the citations meet this standard. See WP:OFFLINE for advice. DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:12, 20 November 2022 (UTC)
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Kingdom of Marwar | Kingdom of Mewar | ||||||
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Rao Kandhal | Chunda Sisodia |
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