Talk:Suffering
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I am impressed with the breadth of coverage of this article, as many different perspectives on suffering are presented. However, the presentation is fragmented by too many lists and too many single sentence paragraphs. These should be turned into proper paragraphs which form part of a logical structure. I have therefore added a "List to prose" tag.
Also, there is not enough references to support what is being said, so I have also added a "More sources" tag. Please make sure that a consistent reference format is used throughout (see WP:REF).
In addition, the English expression needs to be tightened. Please read the article carefully several more times, making improvements where possible.
I wish you all the best with your editing... -- Johnfos 04:53, 19 July 2007 (UTC)